song writting

(eww i dont want a umpa lumpa blowwing me off i would be creeped out i think il pass)

(that just made my day :'D )

(i have that effect on people)

[i'm gonna do what i was doing before okay]

(chorus)

[verse 3]

the next few months i had one dream
and one dream only
i walk up to makena's house
knock on the door
she awnsers,sees me, slams the door
knock again, no awnser
take out a gun and blast through the handle
walk in see the same man
get mad and blow through his skull
then i yell at her while she calls the police
before she can say my name blow through her skull and run
burn down the house and shoot a police officer
take the car and head to natalies new house
she made me mad back then so i blow through her chest
get arrested and burn down the police station

[chorus 2x]

(i like it but why does it always seem like your angry at the world in your lyrics??)

(my life is fuck. my dad and brother where killed. my great uncle did suicide. what do you think)

(ohh im srry bro i didnt know :s )

nah don't be sorry, it's my problem not yours, not anyone elses. i'm mad as hell. that's why i joined the army.

(when do you get deployed??)

(i'm not suppose to say this but. germany is at war in afghanistan, don't listen to the defence minister. whe have been deploying all millitary defenses to afghanistan. and actually, where also helping the americans by giving them weapons and right now where working on getting back there spy plane back right now. my fleet is deployed in 2 to 3 weeks)

(I see no one commented on my last effort, so I'll try again)

Why don't you quit this rap
Cause it's worth crap
It's a hole you dig
And I'm no pig
If you want some fame,
Don't cast around the blame!
Don't do stuff that's puts you to shame
Or dirty your name!
Now this is comin' to a close
Cause that's how this song goes!

i'm getting tired of people doing this, if you don't like my stuff just don't comment

How the fuck you gonna join the army and your like 10? -_-

i have told every fucking person on here, i'm not a fucking ten year old bitch

Let me guess your 21 like you told me right? -.-

yes, now stop posting on this

No. And You are not 21. Why are you Lying?

i'm not lying, and your a bitch who annoys me to fuck so leave me alone

Yes you are.

Army soldiers don't go around blurting out top secret information on the interweb to people they don't know. My father is in the military he is a major, and he doesn't even tell me anything if it's top secret.

it's not even top secret, the defence minister is just a bitch

You don't know Jack Squat about being a soldier. The forums are open to whoever signs up, so don't think you can tell me to stop posting here.

I hope you'll listen to this rhyme
To help you pass the time
Quit acting like a jerk,
Who do you think you are - God's clerk?
Please listen to this fact
When you speak, use some tact.
They say that sticks and stones
Will break your bones
But that words hurt for a lifetime.
So take my advice
Don't scorn it twice
If you want to be cool
Just follow the Golden Rule.
Now my time is up,
I hope you listen, you young pup.

who the fuck you think your kidding
we all know your a ugly ass white dude who wants to own a weapon
i aint taking sides or nunin
but bitch i think you high on sumthing
please don't waste my time with your stupid shit
you proncing from topic to topic like some little bitch
who even was taking to you
but then again my words just go rightt through you
why dont you go play hide and seek
with your self
in a corner
cause no one really cared to comment on you
its just sometimes we pitty the fool
to who i send this letter
its to you white dude who wants to make the feda
(yeah its open to everyone but no one asked for your opion white eagle, that was to you if your not smart enough to notice.)

(i don't care about you two, it's just ryon that bugs the fuck out of me)

(lol im not dissing nobody i just wanna battle white eagle )

he axtualy is preety good, and i might have to take ryon advice, i mean who wants to listen to a german rapping

(I take offense to that, as I have 1/4 German ancestry.)

I have to be good
Cause I'm in the 'hood
The rappin' name is Swagnilla Ice,
And I'm tryin' to be nice
So take my advice
Don't tell me to shut up
That ain't your cup
I'd like to rap all day
But that don't pay
Yeah, I'd like to rap instead
But that won't earn my bread.

(lmfao i would love to hear a german rap)

you think your hood
i take offence to that
i got my hood ratts
we swagged like that
you shouldnt rap
dont make me laugh
i rather have a heart attack
some people might not like it
but im gettin payed
im a legand in the making
and you sold your soul on ebay

I like it.

I like it.