Demonic Samuri (the manga)

So I originaly wanted to make it a manga but released it as a rp... Well im trying to make it really good. Heres what I have so far.

Epilogue: The Great Battle
In the beginning before humanity had seized the world; man was just a pawn for something bigger. Humans had been chosen to fight in a war between good and evil which had taken place. It was a war between Angels and Demons.  Humans were forced to make a choice between the two fierce sides.  A year after the start of the war two clans had risen in great strength, The Shimazu Clan and the Kyogoku Clan. The Shimazu Clan was once a peaceful clan before the battle had started; however, during the incredible war the Demons had twisted their minds, causing them to turn evil and eventually siding with the vile ones. The Kyogoku Clan saw past the Demons lies and fought against what they strive for and so sided with the Angels. After the two clans chose sides they almost instantly despised each other. Fighting every battle to the death with no mercy in order to please their ancestral comrades. The Great Samurai Clans fought until the war had ended 60 years later, with the result of the Kyogoku Clan and Angels defeating the Shimazu and Demons. The Kyogoku has all but disappeared; their numbers dwindled after the war and spreaded out after years of peace. It is now the year 2067 and people have been sighted with the Shimazu clans crest.... Does this mean they are rising again?  If so the Kyogoku clan must stop them, but their numbers are scarce resulting in only 5 clansmen left.  Jax being the third member must go forth and recruit for the upcoming war…. As new recruits in this war they must decide between the Shimazu Clan and the Kyogoku Clan…  It’s up to them to decide the new struggle’s outcome and humanity’s fate… 

Chapter 1: The two clans and the student

The Shimazu and the Kyogoku clans, both great during the war, all but disappeared. Both clans had gone into hiding, not knowing what happened to the other, until the Shimazu lord had found the location of the last remaining four members of the Kyogoku clan.  The Shimazu lord commanded, “ Summon Jax Kazuku to my chamber.” " Yes, my lord." the servant left. " Jax Kazuku, our feudal lord requests your.. Presence." Jax was sitting in his dojo givin to him by the feudal lord. He slightly turned his head and nodded. Jax entered and kneeled infront of the Shimazu lord, "What is it my master?" "Jax you are my good friend's son, You are also my student and have trustworthy ability." he stopped for a second then continued " I have a mission here that will test your strength. We have located the last four remaining Kyogoku members. I want you to go and assassinate them." He paused for a moment then added "This is of somewhat tender nature so keep it quiet." "Yes, my master."  Jax replyed

( im trying to just get the main ideas down first then Ill add in all the little details later.... Chapter one is ganna be way longer)

(you've got skills. Can't wait to read more. :-)

(Thank you This was when I first started it its come out way better... I still need someone who can draw because my artist quit!)

Where do you live, what California right... If so then you can give me a call, like I said I drew some mantas before

(No I dont live in Cali but I want someone that I personally know lol)

Man, I really need some cash

So do I lol